copyedit: timers chapter

Timers/linux-timers-1.md

@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ u64 get_jiffies_64(void)
 EXPORT_SYMBOL(get_jiffies_64);
 ```
 
-Note that the `get_jiffies_64` function does not implemented as `jiffies_read` for example:
+Note that the `get_jiffies_64` function is not implemented as `jiffies_read` for example:
 
 ```C
 static cycle_t jiffies_read(struct clocksource *cs)

Timers/linux-timers-2.md

@@ -79,15 +79,15 @@ As you can see, the `jiffies` variable is very widely used in the Linux kernel [
 Introduction to `clocksource`
 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-The `clocksource` concept represents the generic API for clock sources management in the Linux kernel. Why do we need a separate framework for this? Let's go back to the beginning. The `time` concept is the fundamental concept in the Linux kernel and other operating system kernels. And the timekeeping is one of the necessities to use this concept. For example Linux kernel must know and update the time elapsed since system startup, it must determine how long the current process has been running for every processor and many many more. Where the Linux kernel can get information about time? First of all it is Real Time Clock or [RTC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Real-time_clock) that represents by the a nonvolatile device. You can find a set of architecture-independent real time clock drivers in the Linux kernel in the [drivers/rtc](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/tree/master/drivers/rtc) directory. Besides this, each architecture can provide a driver for the architecture-dependent real time clock, for example - `CMOS/RTC` - [arch/x86/kernel/rtc.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/arch/x86/kernel/rtc.c) for the [x86](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X86) architecture. The second is system timer - timer that excites [interrupts](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt) with a periodic rate. For example, for [IBM PC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IBM_Personal_Computer) compatibles it was - [programmable interval timer](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Programmable_interval_timer).
+The `clocksource` concept represents the generic API for clock sources management in the Linux kernel. Why do we need a separate framework for this? Let's go back to the beginning. The `time` concept is the fundamental concept in the Linux kernel and other operating system kernels. And the timekeeping is one of the necessities to use this concept. For example Linux kernel must know and update the time elapsed since system startup, it must determine how long the current process has been running for every processor and many many more. Where the Linux kernel can get information about time? First of all it is Real Time Clock or [RTC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Real-time_clock) that represents the nonvolatile device. You can find a set of architecture-independent real time clock drivers in the Linux kernel in the [drivers/rtc](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/tree/master/drivers/rtc) directory. Besides this, each architecture can provide a driver for the architecture-dependent real time clock, for example - `CMOS/RTC` - [arch/x86/kernel/rtc.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/arch/x86/kernel/rtc.c) for the [x86](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X86) architecture. The second is system timer - timer that excites [interrupts](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt) with a periodic rate. For example, for [IBM PC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IBM_Personal_Computer) compatibles it was - [programmable interval timer](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Programmable_interval_timer).
 
 We already know that for timekeeping purposes we can use `jiffies` in the Linux kernel. The `jiffies` can be considered as read only global variable which is updated with `HZ` frequency. We know that the `HZ` is a compile-time kernel parameter whose reasonable range is from `100` to `1000` [Hz](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hertz). So, it is guaranteed to have an interface for time measurement  with `1` - `10` milliseconds resolution. Besides standard `jiffies`, we saw the `refined_jiffies` clock source in the previous part that is based on the `i8253/i8254` [programmable interval timer](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Programmable_interval_timer) tick rate which is almost `1193182` hertz. So we can get something about `1` microsecond resolution with the `refined_jiffies`. In this time, [nanoseconds](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nanosecond) are the favorite choice for the time value units of the given `clocksource`.
 
-The availability of more precise techniques for time intervals measurement is hardware-dependent. We just knew a little about `x86` dependent timers hardware. But each architecture provides own timers hardware. Earlier each architecture had own implementation for this purpose. Solution of this problem is an abstraction layer and associated API in a common code framework for managing various clock sources and independent of the timer interrupt. This common code framework became - `clocksource` framework.
+The availability of more precise techniques for time intervals measurement is hardware-dependent. We just knew a little about `x86` dependent timers hardware. But each architecture provides its own timer(s) hardware. Earlier each architecture had own implementation for this purpose. Solution of this problem is an abstraction layer and associated API in a common code framework for managing various clock sources and independent of the timer interrupt. This common code framework became - `clocksource` framework.
 
 Generic timeofday and `clocksource` management framework moved a lot of timekeeping code into the architecture independent portion of the code, with the architecture-dependent portion reduced to defining and managing low-level hardware pieces of clocksources. It takes a large amount of funds to measure the time interval on different architectures with different hardware, and it is very complex. Implementation of the each clock related service is strongly associated with an individual hardware device and as you can understand, it results in similar implementations for different architectures.
 
-Within this framework, each clock source is required to maintain a representation of time as a monotonically increasing value. As we can see in the Linux kernel code, nanoseconds are the favorite choice for the time value units of a clock source in this time. One of the main point of the clock source framework is to allow a user to select clock source among a range of available hardware devices supporting clock functions when configuring the system and selecting, accessing and scaling different clock sources.
+Within this framework, each clock source is required to maintain a representation of time as a monotonically increasing value. As we can see in the Linux kernel code, nanoseconds are the favorite choice for the time value units of a clock source at this time. One of the main point of the clock source framework is to allow a user to select clock source among a range of available hardware devices supporting clock functions when configuring the system and selecting, accessing and scaling different clock sources.
 
 The `clocksource` structure
 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ struct clocksource {
 } ____cacheline_aligned;
 ```
 
-We already saw the first field of the `clocksource` structure in the previous part - it is pointer to the `read` function that returns best counter selected by the clocksource framework. For example we use `jiffies_read` function to read `jiffies` value:
+We already saw the first field of the `clocksource` structure in the previous part - it is a pointer to the `read` function that returns best counter selected by the clocksource framework. For example we use `jiffies_read` function to read `jiffies` value:
 
 ```C
 static struct clocksource clocksource_jiffies = {
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ is not `100%` accurate. Instead the number is taken as close as possible to a na
 * `suspend` - suspend function for the clocksource;
 * `resume` - resume function for the clocksource;
 
-The next field is the `max_cycles` and as we can understand from its name, this field represents maximum cycle value before potential overflow. And the last field is `owner` represents reference to a kernel [module](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Loadable_kernel_module) that is owner of a clocksource. This is all. We just went through all the standard fields of the `clocksource` structure. But you can noted that we missed some fields of the `clocksource` structure. We can divide all of missed field on two types: Fields of the first type are already known for us. For example, they are `name` field that represents name of a `clocksource`, the `rating` field that helps to the Linux kernel to select the best clocksource and etc. The second type, fields which are dependent from the different Linux kernel configuration options. Let's look on these fields.
+The next field is the `max_cycles` and as we can understand from its name, this field represents maximum cycle value before potential overflow. And the last field is `owner` represents reference to a kernel [module](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Loadable_kernel_module) that is owner of a clocksource. This is all. We just went through all the standard fields of the `clocksource` structure. But you might have noted that we missed some fields of the `clocksource` structure. We can divide all of missed field on two types: Fields of the first type are already known for us. For example, they are `name` field that represents name of a `clocksource`, the `rating` field that helps to the Linux kernel to select the best clocksource and etc. The second type, fields which are dependent from the different Linux kernel configuration options. Let's look on these fields.
 
 The first field is the `archdata`. This field has `arch_clocksource_data` type and depends on the `CONFIG_ARCH_CLOCKSOURCE_DATA` kernel configuration option. This field is actual only for the [x86](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X86) and [IA64](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IA-64) architectures for this moment. And again, as we can understand from the field's name, it represents architecture-specific data for a clock source. For example, it represents `vDSO` clock mode:
 
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ struct arch_clocksource_data {
     int vclock_mode;
 };
 ```
- 
+
 for the `x86` architectures. Where the `vDSO` clock mode can be one of the:
 
 ```C
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ for the `x86` architectures. Where the `vDSO` clock mode can be one of the:
 #define VCLOCK_PVCLOCK 3
 ```
 
-The last three fields are `wd_list`, `cs_last` and the `wd_last` depends on the `CONFIG_CLOCKSOURCE_WATCHDOG` kernel configuration option. First of all let's try to understand what is it `watchdog`. In a simple words, watchdog is a timer that is used for detection of the computer malfunctions and recovering from it. All of these three fields contain watchdog related data that is used by the `clocksource` framework. If we will grep the Linux kernel source code, we will see that only [arch/x86/KConfig](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/arch/x86/Kconfig#L54) kernel configuration file contains the `CONFIG_CLOCKSOURCE_WATCHDOG` kernel configuration option. So, why do `x86` and `x86_64` need in [watchdog](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Watchdog_timer)? You already may know that all `x86` processors has special 64-bit register - [time stamp counter](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_Stamp_Counter). This register contains number of [cycles](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clock_rate) since the reset. Sometimes the time stamp counter needs to be verified against another clock source. We will not see initialization of the `watchdog` timer in this part, before this we must learn more about timers.
+The last three fields are `wd_list`, `cs_last` and the `wd_last` depends on the `CONFIG_CLOCKSOURCE_WATCHDOG` kernel configuration option. First of all let's try to understand what is `watchdog`. In a simple words, watchdog is a timer that is used for detection of the computer malfunctions and recovering from it. All of these three fields contain watchdog related data that is used by the `clocksource` framework. If we will grep the Linux kernel source code, we will see that only [arch/x86/KConfig](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/arch/x86/Kconfig#L54) kernel configuration file contains the `CONFIG_CLOCKSOURCE_WATCHDOG` kernel configuration option. So, why do `x86` and `x86_64` need in [watchdog](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Watchdog_timer)? You already may know that all `x86` processors has special 64-bit register - [time stamp counter](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_Stamp_Counter). This register contains number of [cycles](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clock_rate) since the reset. Sometimes the time stamp counter needs to be verified against another clock source. We will not see initialization of the `watchdog` timer in this part, before this we must learn more about timers.
 
 That's all. From this moment we know all fields of the `clocksource` structure. This knowledge will help us to learn insides of the `clocksource` framework.
 
@@ -241,9 +241,9 @@ int __clocksource_register_scale(struct clocksource *cs, u32 scale, u32 freq)
 }
 ```
 
-First of all we can see that the `__clocksource_register_scale` function starts from the call of the `__clocksource_update_freq_scale` function that defined in the same source code file and updates given clock source with the new frequency. Let's look on the implementation of this function. In the first step we need to check given frequency and if it was not passed as `zero`, we need to calculate `mult` and `shift` parameters for the given clock source. Why do we need to check value of the `frequency`? Actually it can be zero. if you attentively looked on the implementation of the `__clocksource_register` function, you may have noticed that we passed `frequency` as `0`. We will do it only for some clock sources that have self defined `mult` and `shift` parameters. Look in the previous [part](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/linux-timers-1) and you will see that we saw calculation of the `mult` and `shift` for `jiffies`. The `__clocksource_update_freq_scale` function will do it for us for other clock sources.
+First of all we can see that the `__clocksource_register_scale` function starts from the call of the `__clocksource_update_freq_scale` function that defined in the same source code file and updates given clock source with the new frequency. Let's look on the implementation of this function. In the first step we need to check given frequency and if it was not passed as `zero`, we need to calculate `mult` and `shift` parameters for the given clock source. Why do we need to check value of the `frequency`? Actually it can be zero. If you attentively looked on the implementation of the `__clocksource_register` function, you may have noticed that we passed `frequency` as `0`. We will do it only for some clock sources that have self defined `mult` and `shift` parameters. Look in the previous [part](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/linux-timers-1) and you will see that we saw calculation of the `mult` and `shift` for `jiffies`. The `__clocksource_update_freq_scale` function will do it for us for other clock sources.
 
-So in the start of the `__clocksource_update_freq_scale` function we check the value of the `frequency` parameter and if is not zero we need to calculate `mult` and `shift` for the given clock source. Let's look on the `mult` and `shift` calculation:
+So in the start of the `__clocksource_update_freq_scale` function we check the value of the `frequency` parameter and if it is not zero we need to calculate `mult` and `shift` for the given clock source. Let's look on the `mult` and `shift` calculation:
 
 ```C
 void __clocksource_update_freq_scale(struct clocksource *cs, u32 scale, u32 freq)
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ void __clocksource_update_freq_scale(struct clocksource *cs, u32 scale, u32 freq
                    sec = 1;
              else if (sec > 600 && cs->mask > UINT_MAX)
                    sec = 600;
- 
+
              clocks_calc_mult_shift(&cs->mult, &cs->shift, freq,
                                     NSEC_PER_SEC / scale, sec * scale);
 	    }
@@ -406,21 +406,21 @@ and creation of three files:
 
 These files will provide information about current clock source in the system, available clock sources in the system and interface which allows to unbind the clock source.
 
-After the `init_clocksource_sysfs` function will be executed, we will be able find some information about available clock sources in the:
+After the `init_clocksource_sysfs` function is executed, we will be able to find some information about available clock sources in the:
 
 ```
-$ cat /sys/devices/system/clocksource/clocksource0/available_clocksource 
-tsc hpet acpi_pm 
+$ cat /sys/devices/system/clocksource/clocksource0/available_clocksource
+tsc hpet acpi_pm
 ```
 
 Or for example information about current clock source in the system:
 
 ```
-$ cat /sys/devices/system/clocksource/clocksource0/current_clocksource 
+$ cat /sys/devices/system/clocksource/clocksource0/current_clocksource
 tsc
 ```
 
-In the previous part, we saw API for the registration of the `jiffies` clock source, but didn't dive into details about the `clocksource` framework. In this part we did it and saw implementation of the new clock source registration and selection of a clock source with the best rating value in the system. Of course, this is not all API that `clocksource` framework provides. There a couple additional functions like `clocksource_unregister` for removing given clock source from the `clocksource_list` and etc. But I will not describe this functions in this part, because they are not important for us right now. Anyway if you are interesting in it, you can find it in the [kernel/time/clocksource.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/tree/master/kernel/time/clocksource.c).
+In the previous part, we saw API for the registration of the `jiffies` clock source, but didn't dive into details about the `clocksource` framework. In this part we did it and saw implementation of the new clock source registration and selection of a clock source with the best rating value in the system. Of course, this is not all API that `clocksource` framework provides. There a couple additional functions like `clocksource_unregister` for removing given clock source from the `clocksource_list` and etc. But I will not describe this functions in this part, because they are not important for us right now. Anyway if you are interested in it, you can find it in the [kernel/time/clocksource.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/tree/master/kernel/time/clocksource.c).
 
 That's all.
 

Timers/linux-timers-3.md

@@ -4,17 +4,17 @@ Timers and time management in the Linux kernel. Part 3.
 The tick broadcast framework and dyntick
 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-This is third part of the [chapter](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/) which describes timers and time management related stuff in the Linux kernel and we stopped on the `clocksource` framework in the previous [part](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/linux-timers-2). We have started to consider this framework because it is closely related to the special counters which are provided by the Linux kernel. One of these counters which we already saw in the first [part](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/linux-timers-1) of this chapter is - `jiffies`. As I already wrote in the first part of this chapter, we will consider time management related stuff step by step during the Linux kernel initialization. Previous step was call of the:
+This is third part of the [chapter](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/) which describes timers and time management related stuff in the Linux kernel and we stopped on the `clocksource` framework in the previous [part](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/linux-timers-2). We have started to consider this framework because it is closely related to the special counters which are provided by the Linux kernel. One of these counters which we already saw in the first [part](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/timers/linux-timers-1.md) of this chapter is - `jiffies`. As I already wrote in the first part of this chapter, we will consider time management related stuff step by step during the Linux kernel initialization. Previous step was call of the:
 
 ```C
 register_refined_jiffies(CLOCK_TICK_RATE);
 ```
 
-function which defined in the [kernel/time/jiffies.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/kernel/time/jiffies.c) source code file and executes initialization of the `refined_jiffies` clock source for us. Recall that this function is called from the `setup_arch` function that defined in the [arch/x86/kernel/setup.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/arch/x86/kernel/setup.c) source code and executes architecture-specific ([x86_64](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X86-64) in our case) initialization. Look on the implementation of the `setup_arch` and you will note that the call of the `register_refined_jiffies` is the last step before the `setup_arch` function will finish its work.
+function which is defined in the [kernel/time/jiffies.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/kernel/time/jiffies.c) source code file and executes initialization of the `refined_jiffies` clock source for us. Recall that this function is called from the `setup_arch` function that is defined in the [arch/x86/kernel/setup.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/arch/x86/kernel/setup.c) source code and executes architecture-specific ([x86_64](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/X86-64) in our case) initialization. Look on the implementation of the `setup_arch` and you will note that the call of the `register_refined_jiffies` is the last step before the `setup_arch` function finishes its work.
 
-There are many different `x86_64` specific things already configured after the end of the `setup_arch` execution. For example some early [interrupt](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt) handlers already able to handle interrupts, memory space reserved for the [initrd](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Initrd), [DMI](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Desktop_Management_Interface) scanned, the Linux kernel log buffer is already set and this means that the [printk](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Printk) function is able to work, [e820](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/E820) parsed and the Linux kernel already knows about available memory and and many many other architecture specific things (if you are interesting, you can read more about the `setup_arch` function and Linux kernel initialization process in the second [chapter](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/initialization) of this book).
+There are many different `x86_64` specific things already configured after the end of the `setup_arch` execution. For example some early [interrupt](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt) handlers already able to handle interrupts, memory space reserved for the [initrd](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Initrd), [DMI](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Desktop_Management_Interface) scanned, the Linux kernel log buffer is already set and this means that the [printk](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Printk) function is able to work, [e820](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/E820) parsed and the Linux kernel already knows about available memory and and many many other architecture specific things (if you are interested, you can read more about the `setup_arch` function and Linux kernel initialization process in the second [chapter](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/initialization) of this book).
 
-Now, the `setup_arch` finished its work and we can back to the generic Linux kernel code. Recall that the `setup_arch` function was called from the `start_kernel` function which is defined in the [init/main.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/init/main.c) source code file. So, we shall return to this function. You can see that there are many different function are called right after `setup_arch` function inside of the `start_kernel` function, but since our chapter is devoted to timers and time management related stuff, we will skip all code which is not related to this topic. The first function which is related to the time management in the Linux kernel is:
+Now, the `setup_arch` finished its work and we can go back to the generic Linux kernel code. Recall that the `setup_arch` function was called from the `start_kernel` function which is defined in the [init/main.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/init/main.c) source code file. So, we shall return to this function. You can see that there are many different functions that are called right after `setup_arch` function inside of the `start_kernel` function, but since our chapter is devoted to timers and time management related stuff, we will skip all code which is not related to this topic. The first function which is related to the time management in the Linux kernel is:
 
 ```C
 tick_init();
@@ -25,12 +25,12 @@ in the `start_kernel`. The `tick_init` function defined in the [kernel/time/tick
 * Initialization of `tick broadcast` framework related data structures;
 * Initialization of `full` tickless mode related data structures.
 
-We didn't see anything related to the `tick broadcast` framework in this book and didn't know anything about tickless mode in the Linux kernel. So, the main point of this part is to look on these concepts and to know what are they.
+We didn't see anything related to the `tick broadcast` framework in this book and didn't know anything about tickless mode in the Linux kernel. So, the main point of this part is to look on these concepts and to know what they are.
 
 The idle process
 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-First of all, let's look on the implementation of the `tick_init` function. As I already wrote, this function defined in the [kernel/time/tick-common.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/kernel/time/tick-common.c) source code file and consists from the two calls of following functions:
+First of all, let's look on the implementation of the `tick_init` function. As I already wrote, this function is defined in the [kernel/time/tick-common.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/kernel/time/tick-common.c) source code file and consists from the two calls of following functions:
 
 ```C
 void __init tick_init(void)
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ Whenever the idle task is selected to run, the periodic tick is disabled with th
 
 The second way is to omit scheduling-clock ticks on processors that are either in `idle` state or that have only one runnable task or in other words busy processor. We can enable this feature with the `CONFIG_NO_HZ_FULL` kernel configuration option and it allows to reduce the number of timer interrupts significantly.
 
-Besides the `cpu_idle_loop`, idle processor can be in a sleeping state. The Linux kernel provides special `cpuidle` framework. Main point of this framework is to put an idle processor to sleeping states. The name of the set of these states is - `C-states`. But how does a processor will be woken if local timer is disabled? The linux kernel provides `tick broadcast` framework for this. The main point of this framework is assign a timer which is not affected by the `C-states`. This timer will wake a sleeping processor.
+Besides the `cpu_idle_loop`, idle processor can be in a sleeping state. The Linux kernel provides special `cpuidle` framework. Main point of this framework is to put an idle processor to sleeping states. The name of the set of these states is - `C-states`. But how will a processor will be woken if local timer is disabled? The linux kernel provides `tick broadcast` framework for this. The main point of this framework is assign a timer which is not affected by the `C-states`. This timer will wake a sleeping processor.
 
 Now, after some theory we can return to the implementation of our function. Let's recall that the `tick_init` function just calls two following functions:
 
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Ultimately, the memory space will be allocated for the given `cpumask` with the
 *mask = kmalloc_node(cpumask_size(), flags, node);
 ```
 
-Now let's look on the `cpumasks` that will be initialized in the `tick_broadcast_init` function. As we can see, the `tick_broadcast_init` function will initialize six `cpumasks`, and moreover, initialization of the last three `cpumasks` will be depended on the `CONFIG_TICK_ONESHOT` kernel configuration option.
+Now let's look on the `cpumasks` that will be initialized in the `tick_broadcast_init` function. As we can see, the `tick_broadcast_init` function will initialize six `cpumasks`, and moreover, initialization of the last three `cpumasks` will depend on the `CONFIG_TICK_ONESHOT` kernel configuration option.
 
 The first three `cpumasks` are:
 
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ struct tick_device {
 };
 ```
 
-Note, that the `tick_device` structure contains two fields. The first field - `evtdev` represents pointer to the `clock_event_device` structure that defined in the [include/linux/clockchips.h](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/include/linux/clockchips.h) header file and represents descriptor of a clock event device. A `clock event` device allows to register an event that will happen in the future. As I already wrote, we will not consider `clock_event_device` structure and related API in this part, but will see it in the next part.
+Note, that the `tick_device` structure contains two fields. The first field - `evtdev` represents pointer to the `clock_event_device` structure that is defined in the [include/linux/clockchips.h](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/include/linux/clockchips.h) header file and represents descriptor of a clock event device. A `clock event` device allows to register an event that will happen in the future. As I already wrote, we will not consider `clock_event_device` structure and related API in this part, but will see it in the next part.
 
 The second field of the `tick_device` structure represents mode of the `tick_device`. As we already know, the mode can be one of the:
 
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ First of all we get the current `clock event` device from the `tick_broadcast_de
 static struct tick_device tick_broadcast_device;
 ```
 
-and represents external clock device that keeps track of events for a processor. The first step after we got the current clock device is the call of the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function which checks that a given clock events device can be utilized as broadcast device. The main point of the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function is to check value of the `features` field of the given `clock events` device. As we can understand from the name of this field, the `features` field contains a clock event device features. Available values defined in the [include/linux/clockchips.h](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/include/linux/clockchips.h) header file and can be one of the `CLOCK_EVT_FEAT_PERIODIC` - which represents a clock events device which supports periodic events and etc. So, the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function check `features` flags for `CLOCK_EVT_FEAT_ONESHOT`, `CLOCK_EVT_FEAT_DUMMY` and other flags and returns `false` if the given clock events device has one of these features. In other way the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function compares `ratings` of the given clock event device and current clock event device and returns the best.
+and represents external clock device that keeps track of events for a processor. The first step after we get the current clock device is the call of the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function which checks that a given clock events device can be utilized as broadcast device. The main point of the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function is to check value of the `features` field of the given `clock events` device. As we can understand from the name of this field, the `features` field contains a clock event device features. Available values defined in the [include/linux/clockchips.h](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/include/linux/clockchips.h) header file and can be one of the `CLOCK_EVT_FEAT_PERIODIC` - which represents a clock events device which supports periodic events and etc. So, the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function check `features` flags for `CLOCK_EVT_FEAT_ONESHOT`, `CLOCK_EVT_FEAT_DUMMY` and other flags and returns `false` if the given clock events device has one of these features. In other way the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function compares `ratings` of the given clock event device and current clock event device and returns the best.
 
 After the `tick_check_broadcast_device` function, we can see the call of the `try_module_get` function that checks module owner of the clock events. We need to do it to be sure that the given `clock events` device was correctly initialized. The next step is the call of the `clockevents_exchange_device` function that defined in the [kernel/time/clockevents.c](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/kernel/time/clockevents.c) source code file and will release old clock events device and replace the previous functional handler with a dummy handler.
 
@@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ static irqreturn_t hpet_interrupt_handler(int irq, void *data)
 }
 ```
 
-The `hpet_interrupt_handler` gets the [irq](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt_request_%28PC_architecture%29) specific data and check the event handler of the `clock event` device. Recall that we just set in the `tick_set_periodic_handler` function. So the `tick_handler_periodic_broadcast` function will be called in the end of the high precision event timer interrupt handler.
+The `hpet_interrupt_handler` gets the [IRQ](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt_request_%28PC_architecture%29) specific data and check the event handler of the `clock event` device. Recall that we just set in the `tick_set_periodic_handler` function. So the `tick_handler_periodic_broadcast` function will be called in the end of the high precision event timer interrupt handler.
 
 The `tick_handler_periodic_broadcast` function calls the
 
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if (bc_local)
 	td->evtdev->event_handler(td->evtdev);
 ```
 
-which actually represents interrupt handler of the local timer of a processor. After this a processor will wake up. That is all about `tick broadcast` framework in the Linux kernel. We have missed some aspects of this framework, for example reprogramming of a `clock event` device and broadcast with the oneshot timer and etc. But the Linux kernel is very big, it is not real to cover all aspects of it. I think it will be interesting to dive into with yourself.
+which actually represents interrupt handler of the local timer of a processor. After this a processor will wake up. That is all about `tick broadcast` framework in the Linux kernel. We have missed some aspects of this framework, for example reprogramming of a `clock event` device and broadcast with the oneshot timer and etc. But the Linux kernel is very big, it is not realistic to cover all aspects of it. I think it will be interesting to dive into it yourself.
 
 If you remember, we have started this part with the call of the `tick_init` function. We just consider the `tick_broadcast_init` function and related theory, but the `tick_init` function contains another call of a function and this function is - `tick_nohz_init`. Let's look on the implementation of this function.
 
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ Links
 * [NO_HZ documentation](https://github.com/torvalds/linux/blob/16f73eb02d7e1765ccab3d2018e0bd98eb93d973/Documentation/timers/NO_HZ.txt)
 * [cpumasks](https://0xax.gitbook.io/linux-insides/summary/concepts/linux-cpu-2)
 * [high precision event timer](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/High_Precision_Event_Timer)
-* [irq](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt_request_%28PC_architecture%29)
+* [IRQ](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interrupt_request_%28PC_architecture%29)
 * [IPI](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inter-processor_interrupt)
 * [CPUID](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CPUID)
 * [APIC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advanced_Programmable_Interrupt_Controller)